Thread: T-Hook vs -UNF-
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Old 08-28-05, 03:54 PM   #11
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Voted For: -UNF-

UNF:

Listen, This Guys A Wreck, His Flow Stinks But I Wont WHINE OR SNITCH
But For Real, I Cant Front, Sit Next To, Or Stand BEHIND THIS BITCH
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Lol this was set up real good, likin this...lmao...good line

Dude Aint Hardcore, And We’ve Gotta Real BITCH ON OUR HANDS
Tryin To Step Up To Devinchi, Please Homie, Keep Ya DICK IN YA PANTS
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Lol ok line too...u on that devenchi shit lmao..

It's Obvious That Your Fallin' Off, And You Be KNOWIN IT HOE
Cuz Ur Flows Turning To Shit & Your Punches 'GO WITH THE FLOW'
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HAHAHAHA this was the best line no doubt, sick punch, and good hard hittin

I Promise, I Swear It, I'll Show What DAMAGIN LINES DO
If There's A "Shadow Of Doubt", It's Prolly STANDIN BEHIND YOU
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Hahaha second best line, again good punch, this is hittin hard, best ive seen from ya

Hook Sucks Dick, A Fag That's Tired, And He's An AWFUL DISGRACE
So I Give 'Him A Towel, Just To Take A Load Off OF HIS FACE
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HAHAHAHAHA lmao again really good....yo man

flow was on point, sturcture on point, punches on point, hit hard..


HOOK...no dont ever do thta again work on structure and flow...sylabalise each line, work on it...and come back.....

UNF GOT THIS
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