**the council**
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IP:
this was a nice piece.....unf had a good use of multi's in his verse, some lines were stretched though and this seemed to effect the flow, but it was a good opening verse anyway.......drama queen came real nice with the hook........mad knight....you've elevated a lot....your verse was real good....nice flow and nice vocab...keep it up...one of the best pieces of writing i've seen from you......sincere finished the collab nicely....nice structure....all in all....a very good piece.....8.5/10
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