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Old 08-28-05, 05:49 PM   #24
Willa
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
 
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le beat is good u jsut love eminem lol
flow ur flow wasnt that bad but it wasnt taht good off in a few places but uve imrpoved alot since this
punches werent anything special
ur voice was like odd like i couldnt hear a few of the words like idk
lyrics yea like i siad above not very good bitch are u deaf lol nah
indeph
beat good i like urs too
lyrics he killed u hear le he had soo many personals
flow ur flow was better tahn les in this but it wasnt perfect
quality yes u need to work on this oh well doest mean anything
overall indeph had this
sory le i still love both of u will u rtf
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