Voted For: Jeezy
Deranged
this battle's a sure win..I'ma smack him so his aunti'll feel the thump
and wtf..why you in a rush to lose?..when ur' panties in a clump*
No played out..
ur own mother hates you twice..and she's the one who placed u in strife
and while you claim I'm wasting time...
......bitch........YOUR WASTING LIFE!**
ok... seemed a little forced. How can she hate twice?
must think you pretty now..but after this u'll be boasting a few cuts
callin me a herb but you the one gettin roasted like peanuts***
ok
u better start hualin ass cuz ur fallin flat..down in the subject
Cuz Jeezy.. I ain't DMX..but I'ma still clown you in public
No wack!
u ain't rising...you epotimizing..full of whackness in the package it seems
tired a herbs?....how?..when your the wearin them in your genes (genes)***
ok punch poor closure
your lines were played an forced. You had some okay punches but your multis were forced.. You had a poor strucutre though. Nice flow. All i can say is elevate on harder punches personals an forcing lines.
Jeezy
Ima be real witcha dogg, cuz this battle isnt my first time..
ill even piss in ur mouth and u still wouldnt spit a hot line..*
Funny shit.. nice punch
Like T.I. "im a king" and ur just a pawn, u cant 'check' me 'mate'..
and like fags wearin blue claimin bloods, bro i consider u fake..
GOOD 10/10
If u got guns then point em away cuz u dont wanna hurt yourself..
Only one u touched was that super soaker u got when u turned twelve..
No played
ur verses are like midgets..they wont even stick out if you held down and 'SHIFT IT'..**
I can ask santa to give u raps for christmas and u still wouldnt be 'lyrically gifted'..
Good
u probably have like 10 accounts banned..so you decided to hide behind an alias..
cuz u prefer to 'bite' the cock no matter what the 'DAILY' is..***
ok closure could of done better
You had a nice verse. Hard funny punches. Nice alias personals. Good wordplay an strucutre with the flow
BreakDown
Punches- Jezzy
personals-Jeezy
flow-Tie
Strucutre- Jeezy
complexity- Jezzy
creativity- Jezzy
wordplay-Jezzy
Multis- Jezzy ( De had some but i felt they were forced. A mom cant hate twice?? Make sense
v/ Jezzy for fuunier harder hitting punches an personals with wordplay.
no hate.
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