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Ya mom massages my nuts
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ok your quality is alot better....flow is cool so far.....nice beat...good sample in it....ok your delivery is blan as hell here....u need to animate your voice more...in second verse I'm hearing you rushing a few lines.....the story was solid....it developed nicely.....def a step up for you lyrically....jus your delivery was bad...aside from that this was a solid drop....keep up the good work....1
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Haters spend all they time hating on another's life
Then wonder why when presenting there's to others...no one looks twice
Because at the end of the day, you get what you give
So, when you consumed with his...don't get mad when everyone else is
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