Voted For: MaRVJay1009
dis kid is a fag...i dare u 2 talk shit while im grippin da mag.
nah i aint "workin at a lay's factory" but ima put "chip in a bag"
8...good nameplay and nice internals in set-up...
rap skill you missin it badd...who u killin with ya borin raps????.
you a ex hooker dat use "bend ova 4 bucs" like "warren sapp".
6....nice wordplay in punch..set-up was bland tho...
ya bar's suck n ya flows missin,fam u'll neva go gold spittin.
u hand out ya cd 2 dj's but like "hard headed kids" they "dont listen"
4...weaker than the rest of them,.
ya mother gon be my next freak,quit it nigga ya text week!...
dis like when "j.kidd & vince fight" all he want is "NET beef".
7....nice wordplay
dont say ya ass is bout it..you should be da last da shout it..
only time dj's a "play ya record" is when they talkin badd out it
6....good
u dont even have a record but me im da 1 many-envy-spittin
be4 you came 2 RV da "site was good" like "20/20 vision".......
4..one ur weaker bars..but still good
Good spit here.Structure was good.Had some internals and shit that helped flow a lot.I though some lines like the warren sapp one could been better with a more decent set-up line.But overall...good spit with the sick wordplay.
tryn'a get this battle goin, 3rd time iz the charm,
u shoulda ducked, it woulda saved u from me twistin your arm,
2....this wasn't a punch..no dissing
and hurtin your feelins and bruisin your pride,
by the time i'm finished wit u, u'll wish u had died,
2...some shit....no dissing..u talkin gangsta which is stupuid here
your whole fam iz weak, and y'all flowz iz whack,
how bout the 3 battles y'all didn't accept, remember that,
4...finnaly a punch...but it was a lil weak..
now u battlin the hottest, sick wit the 'fiya', it's no surprise,
lady's nice but i'm not so i'll dick her in the eye lyrically,
3...ur not rhyming now!?!?..and you ain't got the punches
u ain't hearin me so i'll jump on your chest,
and c-walk wit no rhythm cuz i'm 'SO, SO DEF'
1.....stop shit talkin about urself and diss
and 'GOOD', yo i come wit the RAWKUS,
empty the stash pull fast and i smash on u fuckaz
^^3.....no...
Man..U had an ite flow throughout the verse.Basic rhyme scheme ..but still ite.But the main problem..self glorifing.1st bar..2nd bar...and some others..you were self glorifing.And that lady line didn't even rhyme.
Vote-MarvJ...
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