Voted For: Intermental


InfiniteStan

you sound like a bitch with the biggest discrace//
callin me out, im about to put chu in your own place//
^uhm, nothing creative in here, no real punch 4/10

Intermental should switch his ass into heavy metal//
its getting personal , your about to be disabled//
^that didn't rhyme...and uhm again no hardhitting punch 3/10

dont ever think u could come in my thread & insult me//
listen up and take a note of my new key/can u see me//
^no punch whatsoever 0/10

imma beat chu and put chur ass in FEDEX//
im wasting time chatting, especially my cre-DEETS//...
^aight, that was decent 5/10

Total: 12/40 = 30%, work on your punches, your rhyming words, your vocab...


Intermental

Bullets Burst-Precision, Cant ‘See Me’ I ‘Hurt-Ya-Vision’
And They Will No Doubt ‘Cut Off The Stan’ Like A ‘Circumcision’!!
^aight opener, decent punch, good wordplay 7/10

The Knife-To-Ya-Chest, Swipe-N-Ya-Breath, Put This Dike-To-His-Rest
Much ‘Respect To BIG’, But This Time There Is No ‘Life-After-Death’!!
^nice shit right here, good wordplay once again 7/10

il incision~lyrics, beat u in “text” and add sum “visions~with it”/
like how im quick to walk through “STAN'S barz like “prison~visits”//
^staying consistent with wordplay forming it into punch 7/10

like “jigsaw puzzles” ur rhyming is “outa place” so INTER shud make a note/
to use more multis…coz u cudnt hit a “flow” if u fell out a “boat”//
^nice wordplay once again, closed it damn well 8/10

Total: 29/40 = 72%, solid battle verse

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