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Old 08-29-05, 08:36 AM   #2
Jay Royal
I'ma Royal
 
Posts: 302
From: Oulu,FIN
IP:

Voted For: Robert De Niro

yo lets see....

mic:
u got ok punches but ur flow and structure were kinda bad....some lines were too forced and didnt connect....
ur best:
pm’d me callin me a “cookie”, no I’m a man/
call yourself masculine when you probably tried getting breast implants
2nd line too streched.......but not bad..elevate

6/10

what:ur stucture was kinda gd....something same like i have lol..but for real nice shit..punches could be harder but not bad.....flow..ok......still elevate

ur best lines:
this kid's a 'mermaid', everything he spits is half 'bitch like'
how your throwing fast punches? mic can't even pitch right
nice opener..........gd work man............

7/10


keep elevating both of ya......
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