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Old 08-29-05, 08:48 AM   #19
Carlos
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Voted For: Intermental

you sound like a bitch with the biggest discrace//
callin me out, im about to put chu in your own place//
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Ok opener, but the thing is youre punch didnt hit hard homes, try harder with the opener

Intermental should switch his ass into heavy metal//
its getting personal , your about to be disabled//
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Metal doesnt rhyme with disabled.......that sukd

dont ever think u could come in my thread & insult me//
listen up and take a note of my new key/can u see me//
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NAH THAT SUCKS HOMES...GET A DICTIONARY/GET A VOCABULARY/THEN LEARN HOW TO WRITE

imma beat chu and put chur ass in FEDEX//
im wasting time chatting, especially my cre-DEETS//...
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Ok finally summin 0k

Bullets Burst-Precision, Cant ‘See Me’ I ‘Hurt-Ya-Vision’
And They Will No Doubt ‘Cut Off The Stan’ Like A ‘Circumcision’!!

Good opener here, likin the multies and funny too

The Knife-To-Ya-Chest, Swipe-N-Ya-Breath, Put This Dike-To-His-Rest
Much ‘Respect To BIG’, But This Time There Is No ‘Life-After-Death’!!

Lol good wordplay homes good shit there, lol at the BIG thang


il incision~lyrics, beat u in “text” and add sum “visions~with it”/
like how im quick to walk through “STAN'S barz like “prison~visits”//

ese, this was ok, keep at it


like “jigsaw puzzles” ur rhyming is “outa place” so INTER shud make a note/
to use more multis…coz u cudnt hit a “flow” if u fell out a “boat”//

great closer homes, real good shit

1/10...this was rlly bad
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