Feeling the overall concept, might have been done before but still it's interesting. I felt both were seperate stories which is okay though. Both had a strong emotion in their verses, this topic allowed you to use a lot of that and you both did that as well. Also the imagery was on point: sabotage had a more poetic vibe to it where as Mad Knight had the clear vivid imagery. Flow was good in both as well as vocab and such.

Keep it up!

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