-UNF-: staying very consistent with the multis, some places a tad stretched maybe but overall quite solid. Your imagery was the best aspect in my opinion, telling it in a vivid way. Vocabulary was on point as well

The hook was magnificent of course

Mad Knight: I like how you built your verse up slowly towards the actual murder, good short storyline I suppose. The vocab was suited for the topic, your flow was cool. Imagery was combined with raw emotion, solid work!

Damn...that hook...pure dopeness...hehe

Sin'Cere: nice closing verse, good balance between complex and basic in the vocabulary and wordings. The flow was good and I feel the emotion was strongest in here even though the imagery was there as well. Good job!


What I particulary like about this collab is that all three of you speak on different aspects of murder and view it in various ways. It keeps the reader's interest and the hook sums the overall idea up in fact.

Real nice guys!

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