Voted For: -UNF-

Yo
This A rematch cos i wasnt happy with the last result,
i Dont Like losing to a dirty colt,
after im thru with you police will hire sherlock holmes,
this is rapverse so y the fuck u writin poems,
i spit like fire u sing row row ur boat,
i know u use ur frends 2 help u win vote,
U No Wot Fuck This Website Its Not Ordinary,
Eminem Didnt win the rap olympics cos he had gr8 vocabulary,
get your ryhming dictionary out u gonna need it for this,
and while your there dont 4get ur thesaurus,
the rap game has changed since u started,
me against you bitch r u retarted,
u dont hear 50 speaking like shakespeare,
and em uses slang from the northern hemisphere,
u sed i need to elevate, u talking shit!
keep practising homie cos u spit like a bitch,
you got lucky once so keep the moment,
cos after this im gonna own it,
this a freestyle, its what im good for,
like sayin ur pops is gay an ur mums a whore,
say u will murk me one more time,
then spend a week figuring out a new line,
i dont rap from my soul or heart,
this is anger coming into part,
aww now who needs 2 fucking elevate,
im a pimp but i cant afford an escolade,
say upping 1 more time i dare ya,
cos ill hide with my 9, wait then scare ya,
who cares if i lose as long as i get my message thru,
cus i got a sliencer that'll make fuckers say bless you,
or i could drop by with an uzi,
kill u, an ur lawyer so can't sue me,
hey unf how does it feel to lose to a newbie
Bitch!!

that was a long verse and u didnt say much, no punch no metas or noting, just a flow pratices punch-lines and metaphores

Listen, This Guys A Wreck, His Flow Stinks But I Wont WHINE OR SNITCH
But For Real, I Cant Front, Sit Next To, Or Stand BEHIND THIS BITCH
Dude Aint Hardcore, And We’ve Gotta Real BITCH ON OUR HANDS
Tryin To Step Up To Devinchi, Please Homie, Keep Ya DICK IN YA PANTS
It's Obvious That Your Fallin' Off, And You Be KNOWIN IT HOE
Cuz Ur Flows Turning To Shit & Your Punches 'GO WITH THE FLOW'
I Promise, I Swear It, I'll Show What DAMAGIN LINES DO
If There's A "Shadow Of Doubt", It's Prolly STANDIN BEHIND YOU
Hook Sucks Dick, A Fag That's Tired, And He's An AWFUL DISGRACE
So I Give 'Him A Towel, Just To Take A Load Off OF HIS FACE

a couple punches some cool diss'es decent flow all around better verse