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Old 08-29-05, 09:49 AM   #2
Payn
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damn ma u keep hittin us up wit dez hot pieces i like tha imagery, very creative, original all tha time, vocab was nice, structure was tight, meta's were good, keep writing cuz u got alot of potential ya overall twist on it jus kept reading & waiting 2 except wut was coming next...all tha suspense..lol but keep doin ya thang ~1~LUV~1~THUG~

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