Odi et Amo
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Voted For: OpTmus-B
!Infared!
He a bad critic when it come to heat he never clapping
Im connected to the game like joysticks, dat mean Im ever rapping
^uhm, no punch whatsoever here, self-glorification in second line 3/10
and I read ya wack shit, easy cause I low chase da ballets
and battle you in powerpoint just to showcase my talent
^second line is aight wordplay I guess, first one's bleh 4/10
yo you cant face da challellenge, unlike me cause I show talent
and I dont mean cellphone when I say ya bars is lowstandared
^closer was the only real punch in ya verse, good shit 7/10
Total: 14/30 = 47%
~B~
ur losin this battle will make u angry, could say that u'll 'see red'
u aint on my wavelength,i got gamma rays that'll leave u braindead!
^good punch with personal touch in first line, second's bleh 7/10
I'm U.V. as well but nt the colour, that stands for Ultra Violent!
Infra red!? nah ur more like a ray of light in a rainbow-Ultra Bent!
^uhm decent wordings, could've been better though 6/10
but ur nu n already ho showed so u probly dont no tht im talkin physics
now, hit me bak wit sumthin sik not wat i predict which is newbie genralistics
^aight closer, good punch and ish 7/10
Total: 20/30 = 67%
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