Voted For: OpTmus-B

Structure-Both had iight structure, but i felt a more ongoing flow with ~B~ kept ya lines in tacked and everything ship-shape infared ur lines was kinda off...didnt get much flow off of it

Vocab-~B~ had great vocab in ya verse throughout ya whole verse made it enjoyable to read and made it appealing to ones eye....as for infared....ur vocab was basic and didnt stand out.....up on your vocab.....

Multis-Neither had any appealing multis in your verse.....wasnt really a key in this battle so.....cant really vote on this catergorie

Punches-No doubt ~B~ ya punches was all there, fresh ta def.....really something ive never seen before.....all went together nice....infared most your lines were played and didnt have an effect on your opponent you were more self. glor than actualy dissing your opponent...up on that

Personals-~B~ Had the noob disses that were fresh and intact made ya verse good..to read and they were noticable and hard hitting, keep it up...infared didnt feel u had any personals at all....weak verse man

Originality-~B~ had the only real fresh original disses/punches in this battle it was a sure merking......infared elevate in ya text battles try and actually diss your opponent...no hate though

v/~B~

rtf in my sig links.....1

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