Voted For: NiggaPlease


NiggaPlease

On this site hes a herb he calls him self bat man
But behind his computer screen hes really a fat man
^made me chuckle, not creative, still funny though 7/10

My lyrical flowz will bust ya head nuff said
This nigga couldnt winna battle even if he bit the frontlines thread
^first line self-glorifying, second was good one 6/10

They talkin bout this cat sayin he whack well its true
Cuz even ciarra got bigga goodies than you
^haha, laughed at the last line 7/10

In this thread he will be known for the l
This cat couldnt be hott if he were rappin in hell
^coo punch, solid stuff 8/10

Its too late, past the time to elevate
He needa new name Time for his comp to regenerate
^again aight shit 6/10

All his power his skill is undefined
Whats up wit that name? what goes on in ur mind
^coo closer 5/10

Total: 39/60 = 65%, work on more creative and hardhitting punches, more complexity in your verse


Batman

yo u wanna battle me all i got to say is nigga please
you better get in line bitch cuz theres sum merkage fees
^uhm no at second line, first one was decent 6/10

all kinds of people wanna battle me cuz they think i aint good
but they aint sayin that when i wreck they hood
^ uhm where is the punch? nowhere! 0/10

this might be added to your record but its still another loss
man u aint got no salad for bitches to toss
^aight shit right here, decent punch 6/10

i know it wasnt your idea for this battle but dont back out
ive seen ur battles and i knew i was gonna win without a damn doubt
^coo punch with personal touch 7/10

please nigga u cant measure up to me son
i listend to larry the cable guy and i got-r-dun*
^coo wordplay, decent stuff 5/10

Total: 24/50 = 48%, get more punches in your stuff, better wordplay, more creative things and overall way more punches!

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