unf-Had a pretty solid drop yet your structure was off, i feel that i couldnt quite grasp a flow on ur verse you had intact multis and ur vocab was ok...can still up on that...u used great imagery....and made your point 7.5/10

hook by dramaqueen-Good hook, had nice multis in it and helped all the verses stay in tact this hook was 8/10

madknight-Your verse was something else, ur structure created a very nice flow...ur multis were ok and ur vocab was onpoint.U stressed great emotion..and good imagery 9/10 for ur verse keep doin ya thing

sin'cere-I felt your verse was the most gangster, lol u had lots of gun talk didnt have much multis and ur vocab was weak...up on those for the future....u still had great imagery and stressed your opinion well..7/10.....keep it up and keep writing

ya'll rtf on my o/ms or just leave an honest explained vote on my battles peace

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