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Old 08-29-05, 02:40 PM   #7
Dickard.
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nice solid piece right here, felt both verses

Sabotage-Ur structure was kinda off but ur flow was still tight interesting...u used good vocab and stressed ur emotion well....also used vivid imagery.....lack of multis but made up with it wit ur effective verse 8/10 keep it up

Torch-Ur structure was awessome, created a very good flowing verse.....Felt your rhyme scheme was rather simple yet u made an effective point with your good emotion and imagery very nice.....keep it up 7.5/10

rtf on my sig links
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