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IP:
Tite Piece Fams,
Especially For The Length Of It.
Your Really Didnt Leave Yourself To Much Room To Explain,
But You Managed To Pack Alot In There.
Kept A Nice Steady Flow Throughout, Nice Emotion
... I Got Kind Of A Mono Tone Vibe From This.
Depressed Sort Of Tone, Suicide Note Type Of Material
... Not Sure If Thats Where It Was Supposed To Go But Thats How I Read It,
And It Sounded Pretty Dope That Way.
Imagery, Eh Nothing Really For That.
This Was More Of An Emo, "My Feelings Are..." Type Of Pieces
... Not Really Any Room For Imagery So Its Not A Big Deal.
The Emotion Made Up For That.
Strong Piece Overall Mayn,
I'd Give It Like An 8.2/10
... Maybe Slap A Hook And Another Verse On That.
*Shrugs*
Good Job Though,
.One.
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