Thread: Sin`cere vs E.C
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Old 08-29-05, 05:38 PM   #45
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Voted For: Sin`cere

This guy is too E.C, Ejected Content we see it in ur name
He think he hot on the track when he only burning on a train
4....was kinda weak
And the only thing hot in U.K. is at those threats & bomb locations
Cuz u get blast at that spot like E.C was one of the 101 Dalmations
6....good concept...worded a little poor however
And no need for carnations cuz really noone undastands ur ac~cent
Cuz u getting hott is when u lay out in the sun on top of the cement
5...shoulda switched it around so that the act-cent was punch

seriously kid, your steeping wrong, just get the fuck off this board,
you put a prostitute out of business the amount of times you get whored,
3....played.....
it's like i'm snapping your bones i thought you'd give up sonner cuz,
your verses are up in arms................. by the way they humour us,
5...ok...but could have been worded better and added some more complexity
i dont even need to try... people look at you and frown,
coz your skills are like stress........they just keep bringing us down,
4...too basic

Ok..this battle didn't have any spectacular lines at all.I thought E.C had some played lines like the prosititude/whored one and basic ones like the stress one.That middle bar with the humour us coulda have been better with some extra wording.
Both of you need to work on set-ups and making them relevant to the punch.
But I think Sin cere got this for a more creative and compex verse.

Vote-Sin cere
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