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Old 08-29-05, 05:56 PM   #41
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Voted For: veyetal

You juss "out and about" cuz "being pussy illegal"...........and "homie you criminal"
And judgin by yo "avy and text skillz".....you still aiming toward being original......
5....weak...weak....c'mon....
I mean really You're juss lonely and unsucessful homie....as far as crews went....
Vey you got "eye' for this "shit" you should see.....I drop unexpectly like his sig bowel movements(bird shit)
4...stretched like fuck!....and the punch was a played concept worded bad,
Looks like Tha LW tournament got you fucked......cuz you juss "Lose Well" V
...It's a shame...You would'nt "break me down" if you were "spelling me"
3...didn't rhyme well and the punches ain't connecting
Homie you're juss a "dull sepicmen"..... like god had prewritten seeds
he had majority of infant fans Wit Geber on his verses....he still did'nt get feed
4....you got good vocab..but it doesn't disguise the lacking punches
Yo homie this is juss "one on one" don't "Flex" wit me...and call for intefearance...
He wanna be a "Living Legend"... but Im afraid Daubs wit a sig can't fix yo apearance
3....the dude IS in LL...


this dudes a clown with rhymes, and RV is the jerk's stage
im not talking bout killing time, when im about to merk age
6...good nameplay
whats this bout good days? cause i see free agent, that says alot
oh wait, having bad days....you're just talking bout whenever you drop
8..LOL.....good punch..worded nicely
so what? im beating this kid, i dont need to be bringing reasons
cause i'll spring to make this bitch fall quicker than skipping seasons
4...weak
this kid even insults himself, wow, how could ya be that dumb
even he knows he doesn't have skill.....just look where he's from
5....this was ite....
4-0 eh, hope you were playing around, cause those 4 were all no game
but i'll ruin that record faster that trashing the hall of fame
4...more like self glorifing

Ok..I though veyetal got this mad easy.Fokuss..ur punches were weak.The open mic you did on Trigga town was better than diss.Stop trying to be so complex and just worry about dissing and shit.Get some personals n shit.That bowel movements one was shit...learn not to use gay vocab.Next to it you had to say"bird shit"...whenever you have to do that..then you got gay vocab.

Vote-Veyetal for harder hittin punches & shit
Rtf below....or this vote will be removed in 3days
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206352