Thread: fraud vs Vaskez
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Old 08-29-05, 06:06 PM   #7
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Voted For: Vaskez

The table is set, & im gonna kill yet another
Cuz im the toast of the town & murder is the bread & butter
2....not a punch...self glorifing
Imma pound vaskez so hard his head has craters, destroying his spline
N we know he aint original, cuz he serch for old-punches to flip like a trampoline
4....played out concept......
u aint a hero who came home from iraq when i say the whole block-is clappin *meaning shoting*
vaskez couldn’t move a crowd if he was throwin rocks at ‘em
3....horrible punch
vaskez was talking flagrant, aint no avoidin a beatin'
Then acted so rash... he needed some ointment to treat it
3.....omg....u serious?

Bitch ya produce more wack than a flyswat, ain't no mack
You gettin turned into a pin...
................................is the only time you successfully a-tack
5...ok wordplay
I heard you're wack n' fraud-u-lent........out your lyrics
But still didn't get any INTEREST, that's how I hear it
7.....good punch and a good set-up along with it
My verse, ya better fear it, cos YOU rap as quiet as a mouse
N' it might seem like good in-tent...
.............................................but ya still sound shit "in tha house"
6....good wordplay in punch..but set-up was gay
Get ya ass off the couch, but ya pussy, don't try steppin'
Cos if rap's your forte...then I'm the fuckin siege weapon
5...ok

well..this was really one-sided.Fraud.That 1st bar with the bread and butter...not a punch..that's self-glorifing.That trampoline line was a played concept.Plus it had filler with that pointless original part.And the rash/trowin rocks lines...weak.

Vote-Vaskez
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