Sab..i think you need to work on flow.That 1st bar didn't even rhyme.And a couple of lines were a lil too long and could have been compressed for a better flow.Wording was a little off.
..I thought torch outshined sab.I was really feelin torch's rhyme scheme.Kept a nice flow throughout the whole thing.Wording was good too.Good job..keep it up.

Overall...I liked the message and everthing you guys had.7/10 peice
Rtf in my sig if you can....