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Old 08-29-05, 08:46 PM   #10
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Voted For: Mad Knight

Fraud-You had a good concept,stuck with topic fairly well,the vocab was okay and it flowed very well,it was creative and enjoyable and the structure was good

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Life gives balance and balance brings neutrality...
Light, dark, evil and kindness brinin in casualties...

very good man 8.5

Mad Knight-Great Concept,You stuck with the topic throught the whole verse,The multis were making the words rhyme perfectly so your flow was perfect,The vocab was very good,It was very creative and i like the way you ended it

*The Devil has died, so everyone is being bad cuz they know they can’t go to hell

Very Creative

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As I instinctively turn around, I view my walls filling with shades of the darkest water
Blood splattering on my window as men shoot around in a crazed bird's slaughter

Very Very Good man 9.5

This battle would have been a nice ass collabo
Both of ya stay up