damn i really like this, you had a nice stucture i like the new format you use, nice flow kept it goin, imagery kept this piece together nice story and you showed very much of emotion nice job with that, i thought you could up vocab to give it more depths but vocabulary isn't everything, just a nice lil piece here, props for usin my last name just a nice lil piece gurl i love reading your poetry your very good at it, keep droppin maybe we could do a poetry collab sometime

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