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Old 08-29-05, 09:35 PM   #6
X-tortion
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I liked this verse...the content seems complex in meaning..but simple & to the point as far as word usage...the multi's used were nice as well...good vocab & wordplay also contributed...My favorite parts were the following

guess bein meek you worthless can you do beats a service?//
Droppin beneath the searches kinda defeats the purpose//
people drop audios but it takes weeks to rehearse it//

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wondering when will Hip Hop ever really open it's door//
I'm just stuck spittin text in Open Mics and corner stores//

Overall..this was a good verse..only thing I can really dispute on is structure..but it doesn't matter that much...keep doin what you do
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