The quality was off, your accent is thick in a couple parts
it sounded like you was "mumble mumble mumble bitch"
like you forgot the words or something

Then you can tell you was reading
Memorize your verse next time, it'll help you put more emotions into it
cause you'll have the rythm and feel already down
Then it'll make doin adlibs easier

Turn your vocals up cause the beat drowned out other parts

I've heard worse
Perfect your delivery then worry about adlibs, the adlibs were a little much


5/10

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