not sure about the man........ *smiles* very nice piece! nice structure and flow, but i'm not sure witness and impressed rhymes........... i liked your style and ability to use your vocabulary fluently in your piece, we should collab sometime. overall 9/10 keep em comin.

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"I don't want to be deep... I want to feel deep and use that feeling to express depth itself..."
-Konchance

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