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Old 08-30-05, 03:10 AM   #57
Young_law
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Voted For: Mysteri

Drakel

Came with a few nice punches, but you revolved almost your whole verse around one topic try to "broaden your horizons" a lil bit mo, brag and vague dont rhyme, "dumb bitch's slacking in text, but she aint worried she's falling fast
cause look at her pics...she already knows the term 'hauling ass'" good personal towards her pics if you would have added more personals to your punches you would have won this battle, your verse was str8 overall but not good enuff 2 win this battle

Mysteri

Nice verse came with some good punches, punches were unique you might say, i noticed some good anologies in there
"your dick's too small, wudn't be rich if you turned sex-to-money", "verse is just clowned..but if ya dick size was seen in ya steeze bars
then you`d have more ‘1-inch punches’ that`d rival bruce lee’s art"

this vote goes to mysteri
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