Voted For: Deranged

I'ma leave your skin all shot cuz in this....your skill's been outblocked
n that one and only in ur avatar stand for your only win you got
^^heh, ok
ur skills lighter than a cinderblock...is being whack ur main task?
i'll beat you in less than a sec.cuz really.. that's how long ur reign'd last
^^not too bad
there's no hope for you..ur dreams of bein dope is through..ur flopped flat
& your already passed last.....homie......isn't it best you stopped rap?
^^nah
RV's sick of you,I bet..you posting pics of u on the net with a wigga's hat
changed name from Law cuz when u spit..they all say "Thatnigga's whack!"*
^^okish
at home..you hoasting your mate..but here..your gettin roasted from hate
& the only thing nastier than you postin ur abs..is you posting ur face**
^^heh, ok

vs.

Yo Dont get mad when i master you,drop 2 clips when im blastin you
Have my goons chasin afta you, lyrically hard hittin when i tackle you
^^no, all threats, no diss
This cat should just throw in the towel cuz im lyrically superior
I'ma take it easy on dude cuz in every aspect he's literally inferior
^^diss, but worded too simply/unoriginal

I guess you could say i was destined to win this battle..it was meant 2 be
Itsa matchup like Nas and JaRule he not good enuff this ray charles could see
^^eh, okish, but not really direct
Dont come at me stupid kid, cuz theres no doubt my rhymes are colder
And when you step 2 me wrong i'll end up openin ya chest like a folder
^^simile, but those are still kinda noobish disses, ok

This little boy iz fukin worthless, gives off gay vibes like no otha
Caught him jackin off in tha corner when i got thru romancin his motha
^^no, sexual disses like that, are basically gay

well I can tell deranged took on a much less experienced opponent. No hate to ThatNigga, you just gotta use new and wittier concepts.

Deranged - also try including some wordplay to make your verse more witty

v/Deranged

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Fee Fi Fo Fum, now bitch I'm a giant
And your ass is like Jack, but your magic beans is wack
Skills is what you lack
I'm like a Benz, you ain't even like a Cadillac
Ya more like a Reagal
I'm a pittbull and you's a beagel