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Voted For: -UNF-
Ayo, Ya Twice Before.. Been TORN-AND-RAPED, So Mind YOUR-DAMN-FACE! Cuz -UNF- Be "Droppin Disciples" Like "Vice LORD-HAND-SHAKES"*!!//
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Lol good opener UNF but watch the structure dawg....
You'll Get'cha Brain & FACE-MAULED, Ass Fucked With BLADES-RAW, Grenades & CHAIN-SAWS! I'll Have You "Throwin In The Towel" Like "Proky BASE-BALL"!!!//
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Lmao.......yo man that was sum sick lines, the structure is summing you really need to work on..but the thing is you have the multies here so structure is not that imp
BELIEVE-YA-ASS-IS-BASSIN' To Think You Next To Me Or EVEN-HALF-ADJACENT; Cuz The Only People Screamin "FUCK -UNF-!!" Is Successful REHAB-PATIENTS!!//
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Ok that was good good wordplay....good multies again
You Know Me I Left ABUSED-IN-TIGHT-SPITS, You Tellin WHO-TO-BATTLE-BITCH?!? Shit, Even When You Hiding "Copyin Punchlines" This Kat Fails To CHOOSE-THE-"RIGHT-CLIQUE"!//
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Best line right here, great wordplay, great multies, super flow, jus great
Now You FOUND-DEFEAT, I'll Out RHYME-A-THOUSAND-TEAMS For POUNDS-OF-GREEN While This Kid Is Hiding... Only Seen "Flossin" Cuz He Can't Keep My "LINES-OUT-HIS-TEETH"*!!//...
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Lol decent puch fuckd structure but decent punch...good verse
Yo man T-Hook, you are a newb and was expecting youre verse to be like that, the structure is messed, use multies and wordplay to hypen the verse and not talk about yourself concentrate on ure oponent, I give this one to UNF
Flow: UNF
Structure: None
Multies UNF
Wordplay: UNF
Punches: UNF
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