Voted For: DA RIPPA

Jae .StyleZ.
lyrically I'm popping techs so read my words an feel what i texted
cuz like Drunk Driverin Campers I'll leave D(thee) R. V. Wrecked..
(R.V. the site an is like a mobile home)
^not a good opener nor diss....forced the rhyme 1/10^
This Skills magic,Ur toned low next to a Ringer
Jae Tighter, He'll get "D - Ciphered" like homosexual Swingers
^self glor. no diss......0/10^
THis Is my lyrical mind at work givin u lyrical fines...
CAuse im quick to cross out "D's" Like NO Dumping Signs....
^no........0/10^
OVERALL:Your verse was lacking hard punches...you had 6 lines 4 of nothing.....but weak punches and 2 of self glor. that did absolute nothing for you. I sugest you up on your punches....and personals and make them directed to your opponent and hit hard....elevation is needed

Da Rippa
*yo you couldn't spit shit, if your head was up fat basterd ass*
*when you fuck a bitch, it's like going deepsea diving for crabs* bar 1
^good word play, kinda weak diss but still hit 4/10^
*i'll take ya "style flows", eat it, digest it, shit it out on ya dome*
*have you crying to ya moma "he won't leave me alone"* bar 2
^Bad structure...bad flow....but still had a diss against your oponent 3/10^
*i would end this verse telling you to kiss ya mama "for me"*
but i can't cause ya mama mouth is "on me"* bar 3
^Those lines are played, gutta make it creative if you use it 3/10^
OVERALL:You had a better verse than your opponent....some lines was played but you actually had a couple punches that hit.....so not as bad....up on your overall punches and personals...

V/DA RIPPA

RTF ON MY BATTLE IN MY SIG HONEST VOTE*

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