not bad

your flow wasnt perfect
your addlibs SCARED THE SHIT OUT OF ME
You'll be spittin and it'll be like "WHYYY DIE MOTHERFUCKER"

I thought I was being cursed just from listenin to ya shit. lol

but yo, Imma tell you how to do ya addlibs
when you record your vocals, make sure that they are atleast, ATLEAST 2.5 db higher then the beat. and when you mix it, and edit them, make sure you dynamic process them as thumbass or w/e
when you do your addlibs, make SURE that they are atleast 1.5 LOWER then your vocals.
and when you dynamic process your adlibs, make sure you use..uber-punch.
that'll make it sound better.
now, to what you was actually sayin, I have no clue.
I DO know you were rappin though, and I didnt like your flow
its like what the other dude say mumble mumble muble BITCH!!!!
So work on that too.

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