i know about the line........... *smiles* solid piece, good emotion, best poems seem to be the ones from personal experience...... your's is almost like a memory..... tryout for poetry at TTI......... we can alwayz use another poet.... overall 9/10 keep em comin.......

oh, since u forgot a link, and u posted feedback on my piece i figured i'd help u out:
^^his link:http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=202397

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"I don't want to be deep... I want to feel deep and use that feeling to express depth itself..."
-Konchance

my poetry:
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