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Old 08-30-05, 03:29 PM   #3
Dickard.
A Life Of Chryme
 
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wow mizz fyre, this was hott fyre....it had good structure, which created good flow...ur vocab was onpoint....went well with the verse...didnt use multis..which wasnt a problem becuz ur imagery and emotion took care of it.....id say tihs is one of the best ive read in a while 9.9/10....im lovin it...keep it up
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