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Old 08-30-05, 06:46 PM   #8
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Still Making Webs....
 
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Voted For: Jae .StyleZ.

da rippa

*yo you couldn't spit shit, if your head was up fat basterd ass*
*when you fuck a bitch, it's like going deepsea diving for crabs*
6/10 KINDA WACK BUT ITS OKAY

*i'll take ya "style flows", eat it, digest it, shit it out on ya dome*
*have you crying to ya moma "he won't leave me alone"*
5/10 2ND LINE KILLED IT. SO LOW SCORE

i would end this verse telling you to kiss ya mama "for me"*
but i can't cause ya mama mouth is "on me"
4/10 BY FAR THE WORST LINE IN UR VERSE

OVERRAL U GOT A 15/30 ALL I GOT 2 SAY IS ELEVATE

Jae .StyleZ.

lyrically I'm popping techs so read my words an feel what i texted
cuz like Drunk Driverin Campers I'll leave D(thee) R. V. Wrecked..
4/10 WACK

This Skills magic,Ur toned low next to a Ringer
Jae Tighter, He'll get "D - Ciphered" like homosexual Swingers
5/10 HOMO LINES ARE PLAYED.

THis Is my lyrical mind at work givin u lyrical fines...
CAuse im quick to cross out "D's" Like NO Dumping Signs....
8/10 THIS LINE IS THE BEST IN THE WHOLE BATTLE ACUTALLY MADE ME LAUGH
OVERALLY 17/30 NOT BAD BUT STILL NEED 2 ELEVATE

V/JAE STYLEZ