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Old 08-30-05, 07:34 PM   #58
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Voted For: Drakel

yous lackin fine wit my text is divine try matchin mine kids
but don’t ‘think yall can school me’ being absent minded
6...good punch and flow..tho the multis in set-up was a little forced to me
you write rhymes for kids novel,I write "Text-for-Dummies"
your dick's too small, wudn't be rich if you turned sex-to-money
3...nah..i ain't feelin this..ESSPECIALLY the set-up..really forced multi here too
verse is just clowned..but if ya dick size was seen in ya steeze bars
then you`d have more ‘1-inch punches’ that`d rival bruce lee’s art
3...stop with these jokes..it ain't connecting well
you're most cowardly puss on this board, you ain't bad as me
bitch thought making new aliases would give him more personality
4...ok..but didn't connect well again
wow, you’re a horrible lyricist, ur verse is just….babble babble
do your words ever have a point? Not even when playing scrabble
5..didn't like the rhyming here but punch was ite
and just forget about creative bars, jus stick ta ya played lines
you're ass will never release an album with your one-tracked mind
4...he doesn't do audio so this seemed to be a general punch

i knew you always liked me, but i didn't come here to brag
came to solve the misteri of your whackness, but signs are looking vague
5...kind of a personal i guess..so good...
fuck it, im killing this pussy, and no other cats will care
cause your style is more plain....that the fucking hats you wear
6....good....
but shes a lover, not a hater, even still after this fight
heh, shit, im pounding bq more than her saturday nights
5...good..but sexist jokes while battlin females are played
and baby let me tell ya, you're not just cuz ya think ya thug
i hate to beat you black queen, but they do call me the king of clubs
6...good wordplay
you do write alot on RV though, but i still see no hope in sight
you just hang around that corner, cause one day you might get to open mic
7....ur best bar in my opinion
dumb bitch's slacking in text, but she aint worried she's falling fast
cause look at her pics...she already knows the term 'hauling ass'
4...ok..but i think one rip on the pic is enough.
lez be real though, she's been here since december, and still no skill
shit, so im rippin' black queen easier than her dildos will
4...nah..like i said..too many sexist jokes are a no

Ok...Drakel got this..

Mysteri...Problem with your verse was that you were really lacked personals.i don't recall seeing one at all.Just general punches that could have been used against anyone.I esspeccially hated those jokes about his dick.And some of ur rhyming didn't connent.Like text is divine/lackin fine...and text for dummies/sex to money....those are forced multis.

Vote-Drakel