Voted For: PiZawNeD

deranged:
ur got nutin to be proud of..shit..so go slit ur wrists in the crowd
like cacophonic vocalists...this bitch shouldn't spit aloud (allowed)
bad, "shouldnt spit allowed" doesnt make sense
so quit right now...u tripped on the mound...u better off making no sound
beat u before..I'll beat again. peirce ya breast with a stake,hit the ground
pierce ya breast with a stake? go to the weapons cypher, not front lines, if all u gonna do is talk bout killing people
u musta forgot..i ripped you last time..u started to rot in the post
smokin up that ganja with the gravel paper cuz your knot at all dope
doesnt hit very hard...
just stop..there's no hope..start the run home..u beated by the worst rhymes
only time u moving up that ladder/latter is when foamin on the climbers
beated isnt a word, and u just dissed urself
why you bother coming?..you must be tired of the pain,bitch,you can't beat me
rap may have been a faze (phase)..but you lost it n it explains the insanity
ur setup was thge same as the last bar... "u have no chance"...
so get ready for the anotomy.. u life reject....u never picked on in the party last
u never got ur back on the thrown/throne like fat people in karate class
best punch yet, but still doesn't hit hard...

overall: nothing hit hard, u even dissed urself... weak verse

pizawned:
Yo man i dont suck man im just new/
Deranged,?I have no idea or clue/
shouldnt have said "man" twice in one line... doesnt hit hard... lines are too short
When i finish ya ull prolly have diarreah/
Guess wut im gonna say when u lose?SEE YA/
one word: wack
Ya man,I aint that easy,ill prolly be five-and-o/
If i was easy,I would prolly lose in-a-day-or-so/
how is that a diss?
New york,?i think u a wanna be man from new york man/
Uve been here longer then me,i wonder why u still dont have-a-clan/
once again, doesnt hit hard
Battling me,?not so easy,queers like u cant be the-one/
Get yo sorry tail outta here man,or u gonna be shined away by the sun/
another weak punch...shined away by the sun???
Even with 144 posts,ull lose like WA-BAM/
Crying wont get ya anywhere,cuz im ready to eat u like im ready to eat-a-clam/
ooooooo... disssed.... he'll eat u...... NO

overall- every punch was horrible

overall battle- both were weak, but deranged wins cause he had better structure, and somewhat better punches

i don't like to be too harsh, but if i tell u that it was great, u wont elevate
so keep at it, u'll both get better as u get more experienced


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