listening:

lovin the intro lol.. oh shizzle? another one? lol.. the beat is good.. lol wth? its only playing on left side lol.. i mean i can only hear ur voice in left side.. but yeah.. lyrics is pretty good.. flow is good... should show more emotion.. but you need to lean some some skillz with making your presence on mic stand out better.. you should try dubbing your voice on the parts that rhyme to make it sound better.. and also should up your delivery.. your delivery is okay.. but you could do better.. but this track would be better if you show more emotion. so work on that.. but lyrics is okay.. but yeah this is still okay..

7/10

oh n i added u

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