Voted For: Spider

ggnorekkthx is way over the line limit....

spider's wasnt that good, but it wasnt wack like gg's so he wins

spider- good structure, main problem is that the punches dont hit very hard. good job including lots of personals, but more wordplay would help... also, dont make ur setups a basic "ur wack" or "im better"
everyone's guilty of doing that sometimes, but in general, try to avoid it

ggnorekkthx- really need to work on structure, and punches
also pay attention to the rules... with ur lack of skill, the last thing u want to do is write too many lines... i suggest reading tutorials, and studying battles/lyrics of more expierienced text heads


v/spider

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