u got a good voice man, i like ya presence, lyrics are aight, but like u make sounds forced like happy-nuss... i dunno that i wasnt feelin, but u really remind me of ill chris , sumtimes u kinda slow down n pause, u did this all in one take? thats what it kinda sounds like, 2nd verse, sounds like ya vocals are only comin outta the left speaker lol... sumn about the sound that makes the quality kinda iffy, but like i said, ya voice is ill, keep elevating man, u'll get there, i like this

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