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Old 08-31-05, 11:30 AM   #10
Jay Royal
I'ma Royal
 
Posts: 302
From: Oulu,FIN
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Voted For: Stanza

yo this was pretty thight...........

thassarap:
Ur just a net thug, this is rap, u don’t stand a chance in a pen fight
And we all know ur name is Stanza cause it’s all that u can write
...gd notvery hard but concept is gd...5/10
Every battles wack …...and yet you prevail cause of dickriders
The only way u could drop hot text is when mine sets urs on fire
this was maybe ur best bar....i liked it 8/10
U must be suicidal, cause battling against me is the way to sink
Once I’ve finished with ur crew, u’ll be leading Ghost Town Inc
gd closer.........smooth.....7/10

overal 20/30

stanza:
You Gets Torn.. Let Me Demonstrate, Limb For Limb You Being Tossed
Your Skills Are "Old Like Rotten Organs", ...Not Good Enough To "Rip Off"
nice opener.....i liked concept...flow and stucture are gd..8/10
Beat him to a yelp, ..this bitch Will be grieving And seeking-vital-Help
He’s the next level of wackness, which is only preceded-by-his-SELF
lol...nice.......7/10
we know what to expect with ya style, like when summer’s repeating
Your verse be having more "shitty concepts" than a "plumbers meeting"
nice closer.......8/10

overal 23/30

vote stanza......pretty gd battle,no hate
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