listneing through some better than average speakers.

First verse, your mic is CRUSTY. As soon as you started recording I heard the static. The flow is lumpy, too fast some spots, on some others and too late on others. Some EQing would bring this shit out some but the mic is self is still in need of replacement immedately. The hook was off-flow hardcore.

Second verse, mic is ASS and it's a shame since your lyrics are fire. Sounds liek a jerz style. Thew only shortcoming (aside fomr the mic) was the delivery on the closer. Shoudla definitely added more cadence to it. Both yall need new mics, but the second dude needs it like immediately. as in, go rob someone and go buy a mic with the money. 1

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