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Old 08-31-05, 06:13 PM   #13
Deranged
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Voted For: Stanza

Ur just a net thug, this is rap, u don’t stand a chance in a pen fight
And we all know ur name is Stanza cause it’s all that u can write
5...a personal..so good..but didn't connect well
Every battles wack …...and yet you prevail cause of dickriders
The only way u could drop hot text is when mine sets urs on fire
4....shoulda worded the set-up different n put it as punch...
U must be suicidal, cause battling against me is the way to sink
Once I’ve finished with ur crew, u’ll be leading Ghost Town Inc
5..well....decent I guess

You Gets Torn.. Let Me Demonstrate, Limb For Limb You Being Tossed
Your Skills Are "Old Like Rotten Organs", ...Not Good Enough To "Rip Off"
7.....set-up was relevant...punch hit..good
Beat him to a yelp, ..this bitch Will be grieving And seeking-vital-Help
He’s the next level of wackness, which is only preceded-by-his-SELF
4...ok this multi was forced...
we know what to expect with ya style, like when summer’s repeating
Your verse be having more "shitty concepts" than a "plumbers meeting"
5...played punch..

Ok..stanza got this..

Thass was too basic with his execution of punches.Got some ite concepts n all..but ya ain't doin it good enuff.Like...i see wat ya tryna do wit dat 1st bar n all..with the 11 lines diss he did..but the way da punch was layed out...didn't connect.And the rip on avatar..should of been the punch itself..not da set-up.

Vote-Stanza