for ya first its pretty decent mines was ass..beat is nice..with a lil more work on ya delivery you'll get there..just remember to be a rapper doesnt mean you have to rap fast ya feel?? just get comfy on the track and do what you feel is right for you....but other than that its a decent track just do some more.....im working my way up as well...i call it a lyrical excersice..i never make whole songs when its coming on the net its just for practice so make sure u practice recording alot of verses..that way when you get ready to do a whole song you'll be nice at it...cuz having a whole song and it not being good isnt coo..so just record verses and a chorus here and there...AND do some battleing that helps too