Voted For: Torch.



New's Nice, Naw I Was Lying G, Using Reverse Psychiatry
Surprisingly I Came To Battle, But His Verse Was Tired See
4...good flow but weak punch
6 Lines Is Nothing, Look Yo I'll Even Give You A Red Star
You Heard Of Dead Bolts?, Well New's Shit Is Dead Bars
5....weak n kinda basic
I Fed Scars To His Whack Verse, So His Lungs Collapse First
Make Like A Car And Retire, You Don't Belong On Rap Verse
6..that car/retire shit is played tho

Rapforums.com is here?shit u missed site boy get back there,
like change ur sexuality,its over bitch like ur RF flames(fame) were
3..ok first..the set-up was stupuid and flame/fame is not wordplay..it has to be homophones to be wordplay..plus it didn't rhyme
battles none but u r ground like bubblegum, we spit u off,
make some finishing moves like kung-fu before kick u off.
2...not a punch....and u rhyming the same words
think you torching us, I give my property to bet u wont do it,
like bet wrong horse,only time u won was when horse ride on u kid.
5...ur best bar

New edition...you need some work.That 1st bar..too many problems.First..flame/fame..for it to be wordplay..it needs to be homophones.Not just similar sounding.So that was forced.And the bar didn't rhyme(there,were).The 2nd bar..not much of a punch..more like self glorifing..and u rhymed the same word.3rd bar was actually a punch...but it was weak.

No hate....honest opinion
Vote-Torch
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