Voted For: Mike McGuire

MIKE MCGUIRE
I'll rip through ya ribs and ''hand-cuff'' your heart and call it cardiac ''arrest''
Messin with the wrong man, Mike McGuire, is just like the fan and Ron Artest
^good wordplay as well as diss 6/10^
Attack is my code of arms, like you ''deepthroatin'' my rhymes is your destructive bomb
This ''pussy'' is gettin ripped and leakin of blood, so give this bitch a larger ''tampon''
^again nicely planted diss..5/10^
You got a somewhat dirty mouth only cuz you spit jack shit
Unlike you, I spit dirty lyrics from my mouth like I got gingivitis
^kinda gross self glor. but i liked it 8/10^
I came and burned you like 3rd degree, and melted your spine
How can he be called Infinate when you don't got one punchline
^good ending and personal proof down below 8/10^
OVERAL:your verse was plain with hott original and fresh punches nothing was played you had good wordplay only flaw was structure, but u still had good flow.

INFINITESTAN

your verses & rhymes are droppin easily like a feather
imma write you a note on helpin ur lyrics wich will make u a little better
^terrible self glor. wasnt funny nor diss 0/10^
runnin this cat over until his guts come out and spill
if he survives the attack then im comingout for shoot2 kill
^weak punchline...bad flow 4/10^
closing the walls on ur ass until u cant breathe & speak
mean while i got chur mom bending down on her right knee
^mom jokes are played gutta be creative 0/10^
you need to put 911 on speedial for a a quick use
to bounce of the walls when im coming after you
^no..........................bad 0/10^
you should of saved your credits on rapverse
now all the rappers are coming & snatching ur purse
^hes a guy i doubt he has a purse, weak punch 0/10^
im leaving and closing this case once and for all
leave this game to the pros and go back to playing T-ball
^weak closer but actually dissed weakly prob. best line 3/10^
OVERALL:your lines was whack and weak..no hate man but you got a lot of elevation to do...try making your verse about dissing your opponent not self glor. second be more creative wit ur wordplay and ur disses dont just throw out played punches and expect to win

v/Mike Mcguire

Please rtf since i kindly analyzed your battle its in the sig or front lines pz. 1

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