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Old 09-01-05, 01:05 AM   #2
Young Kidd (LM)
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Was Pretty Nice..flowed well in my eyes...the Multi's were present in general..but nothing really made me just go WOW...but still a few lines were like..think about it..my favorite lines are these..

Respect damn its whack and pathetic how blacks don’t get credit
Stale face and shook to read pale face books yet they say energetic
Hell I don’t get it how they feel we lost if they’re not boss political
Turns critical description and decision is like Egyptian religion pivotal

^ that stuck out to me..specially the last 2 bars ...those were like..hmm dude has a bit of knowledge..so yea...overall..
7.6/10 the only thing i see that could be worked on is wording and take out a few filler words....besides that its pretty nice..
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