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Old 09-01-05, 06:02 AM   #3
Tha Q.
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wassup wit ur vocals and everything low?


and u handled this slow beat well...would be better with more Bravado/Mic presence in ur delivery though...U used Big's style...so u gotta bring it down


yea the hook is pointless

Hooks need to be simple...and the only thing I remembered from that hook is CLAPPED UP

jus use repetitive lyrics in hooks...dats what make HOOKS catchy..REPETITION..chants almost


2nd cat has a nice flow as well


good track...cud be better with a more thought-out chorus though



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