IP:
wassup wit ur vocals and everything low?
and u handled this slow beat well...would be better with more Bravado/Mic presence in ur delivery though...U used Big's style...so u gotta bring it down
yea the hook is pointless
Hooks need to be simple...and the only thing I remembered from that hook is CLAPPED UP
jus use repetitive lyrics in hooks...dats what make HOOKS catchy..REPETITION..chants almost
2nd cat has a nice flow as well
good track...cud be better with a more thought-out chorus though
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