Voted For: AITZ
As i put you in handcuffs and read you your rights,
you're getting taken away for your recent rap-fights
^^wtf? is this a battle verse or a short story? lol :P
put on this jumpsuit, meet your cell-mate Bubba
Until you face the judge, he'll be your full-time luva
^^lol, no, gay jokes are well...gay
you've been briefed on the court case,.. today is the date,
you'll be standing on trial, and meeting your fate
^^lol stop wasting time telling stories and diss him!
All the charges brought against you are for battling Peace
"he's* not dangerous, judge, you can take off his leash"
^^filler
The people on this (web)site will be the prosecution
you have no defense team, and you're facin' execution
^^filler
The judge is calling "order" and he's slammin the gavel
As your next loss, and my win begin to unravel
You try to hold back a tear, but it rolls down your cheek
As the jury deliberates for under a week
Now the room goes silent for the verdict their supplyin
They say AITZ found guilty for self-glorifyin
^^weak diss at the end and the rest was filler
Man are you SURE this wasn't meant to go in the short stories forum or something, cos it doesn't really qualify as a battle verse?
vs.
i merk the best n destroy the worst//
peace back wants to test, but he'll be let all hurt//
^^no, threats
dont step like god, u slower then a turtle//
ugly like frogs, failed 10th grade 4 hurdles//
^^weak
u bust ur balls tryin to drive me up walls//
nothing but stalls, ur punch's are weak n they fall//
^^too simple
i control this "peace" since way "back"//(1)
go find the elbow "greese"...u need it, verse was slack//
^^okish
picture this cat, attackin a police officer..//
here comes a bat, round yo head like violent protesters//
^^no, just statements
u need some protection steppin to this MC//
no effection i kill anything that breaths on me//
^^no, threats
u talk about gays more then u drop punch's//
i bet ur known to lay, and take the cock in lunch's//(1)
^^1st line true, 2nd line is bloody gay
im done wit this poser, ill take another win...place it on my holster//
u can go n fry in a toaster, like bread felt 4 to long....dont mess wit this east coaster!!
^^wtf? no, filler
(1) his name is Peace Back...lol
(2) iv read a battle from him...he was full into talkin bout cocks when he was dissin the other cat...and didnt drop many punchlines...just personals..and lunch's..means lunch breaks...as in school breaks..
I can tell you're both new to this. You both have mostly filler. Forget all that, and start dissing! AITZ wins cos his opponent submitted a short story instead of a battle verse, lmao!
no hate, I found this entertaining